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It caters to my whim inside
Upon the face I see who lied
I thought it was just you and me
I thought it was our destiny
I thought we had each other on a string
and then you left me alone to sing
I believed I was your helping voice
I believed you'd come to me in choice
Not because you chose this fast
I knew of course it wouldn't last
I thought I was the greatest one
I thought I even owned the sun
I believed I was such a good soul
I believed you're love would hide the tole
It isn't me, it isn't time
I had so many things to rhyme
I've written words out many times
and yet come out with same old rhymes
That is just how frustration works out
I think you caused this muffled pout
This feeling deep within
Am I loosing yet again?
Another soul I said I'd share
Another loss I cannot bare
Why is it only me who's here?
because if you need me I'll be there.
No matter what thing you have for me
I'll make sure I'm there to see.
Upon the face I see who lied
I thought it was just you and me
I thought it was our destiny
I thought we had each other on a string
and then you left me alone to sing
I believed I was your helping voice
I believed you'd come to me in choice
Not because you chose this fast
I knew of course it wouldn't last
I thought I was the greatest one
I thought I even owned the sun
I believed I was such a good soul
I believed you're love would hide the tole
It isn't me, it isn't time
I had so many things to rhyme
I've written words out many times
and yet come out with same old rhymes
That is just how frustration works out
I think you caused this muffled pout
This feeling deep within
Am I loosing yet again?
Another soul I said I'd share
Another loss I cannot bare
Why is it only me who's here?
because if you need me I'll be there.
No matter what thing you have for me
I'll make sure I'm there to see.
A poem I had stashed away for awhile, found it when I was cleaning my computer memory and finding a bunch of stuff.
It's actually very old xD Sort of bugs me, maybe from last year? I have no idea. I wrote it for one of my friends who was having a hard time that year. :>
It's actually very old xD Sort of bugs me, maybe from last year? I have no idea. I wrote it for one of my friends who was having a hard time that year. :>
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The seventh stanza's end rhyme was my favorite because of it's cleverness with "time" "rhyme", "times" "rhymes" and what it had to do with the actual content of that stanza.
I really love reading your poems, they always pick at my mind and unfold new understandings as I read them over. ^_^
Oh, on a side note, how is your summer going? : D
I really love reading your poems, they always pick at my mind and unfold new understandings as I read them over. ^_^
Oh, on a side note, how is your summer going? : D