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Aludar Chapter 1

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A story on what is real and what is not. Some things we can’t stop but in some way it’s good that we make them. This story on the other hand is about an inventor and his creations. In some way the world of inventions is a good thing so that someday people will know that you made that…but this one no one needs to see, for it is the thing that changed the world forever.
                    Chapter #1. A.2.9

It was a dark night as if a dark cloud had slowly made its way over the city of Kalin. The man named Ricky .J. Aredon began his last and most magnificent invention ever and he called it A.2.9.
   There were others before this one. Like A.2.1 and A.2.2 and so on. But this one was different, this one needed more it needed a real live sacrifice for the making just like the other ones that needed a human boy or girl. What made it different was that he also put in an Invention that he made before it. And its name was A.2.2 also called a.2.
Every one called him crazy but he did not care.
As he put in the last switch “come to me my invention be alive” He said as he pulled the lever…but not all things go owner way. The monster, the thing was just too perfect.
That thing that he made is called an android it had a human face and body but it had black cat ears a black tail and red eyes.
BOOM!   “W…WHAT HAPPENED?” he yelled
“Sir A.2.9 he woke” A fellow inventor said
“HE WHAT THAT’S NOT SUPPOSE TO HAPPEN!“ Ricky yelled
The thing had opened its eyes. What had happened? What went wrong? Maybe he made it to alive. For it had its own soul and it almost killed Ricky and so it was the last time anyone saw him again. Something had happened in the lab because a green liquid had spattered everywhere and started making humans with animal looks to them. But not the evil ones that we know of now, no they were normal everyday people.  
   
   100 years went by and one girl was working for the news in her school. She thought she might get a good story if she went to the old Kalin lab, not knowing what story she was about to get. No longer was the city named that, now it was Okkybass which was named after a sword that had been passed down in her faily. Now with her mother Cocosin (but everyone calls her Coco) She was about 7 years old and her name was Flower Casson.
slowly going in the lab she said “Hello anyone living here?” Even if she knew no one would possibly want to live in such an old and ugly lab.    “I guess this place is just a tale like some guy made a monster about 100 years ago just a tale not to get us kids not to come here” shhhhh “AH! What was that? Must be the wind, Man pull your self together Flower there’s nothing here” She turned her head and let out a yell “AH SPIDER!”  She yelled as she ran into the place where A.2.9 was sleeping.
“Oh my god now look at that, now that’s a story. I can think of the head line, some kid thinks his so good at pulling jokes, NICE TRY RUPERT I’M NOT FOOLED COME ON OUT!” she said, but no one was there
“If this is no joke then“ she said turning her head and looking at A.2.9’s face.
     A.2.9 did not move and Flower looked on the ground and picked up a small thing that had A.2.9 on it.
“A.2.9? “ she read out loud and watched the creature carefully, now seeing A.2.9 was breathing. She kept her eyes on him, studying him; he seemed to look like a little boy. Then A.2.9 opened his eyes making her jump up and he looked back at her, within a blink of an eye he grabbed her and began to fly out of the lab window.
“Hey you, I can fly too you know, I am a red dragon” she said but still scared to fall (she didn’t really know how to fly).
  It was true that she was a red dragon, red dragon scales on her ears and human face; in fact the only thing that was dragon on her were her ears.
A.2.9 still did not care he still had her in his grip.
“ LET ME GO “ she yelled. A.2.9 stopped in the air and turned to look at the lab BOOM! It exploded and she looked up at him.
“ You…you saved me…so your name is A.2.9?” she stuttered
“Yes” he answered
“Cool you can talk, hey I think we will be good friends, can you bring me home? I live down there on Backwoods Avenue, you can see it from up here” she lied hoping to run in her house and lose A.2.9.   
  They soon landed in front of her house but Flowers mom did not look too happy.
“Flower Casson what do you think your doing going to a place like that, you know better then that?” her mom said
“But mom “ Flower wined
“ And who is this?” her mom asked looking at A.2.9’s ripped t-shirt and pants.                                “Oh mom this is um… A.2.9 “ Flower said “ Can he stay to eat or maybe a room?” she asked crossing her arms back and forth to single please say no.
Her mom was tricky and saw Flower didn’t like A.2.9 so she kindly said “ yes he can stay, but he’ll have to work for me. A.2.9 my name is Cocosin, but just call me Coco”

    You see Coco was the proud owner of an apartment, but not a normal one. This one you only had one room in the place, everyone ate downstairs, but not just anyone lived there, only the ones that really need a place.

  “Yes come with me, I’ll show you the place” Flower said sighing
She grabbed his hand and ran in. Suddenly A.2.9 changed into a boy about 8 years old, dirty blond hair, green eyes, brown cat ears and a brown tail.
“Hey how did you do that A.2.9?” Flower asked, as she looked at him funny.
“Do what?” he said                                                                                            
“Um change your look”
“Who is A.2.9? My name is Aludar “
“Oh I thought you said that you name was A.2.9… I…I guess I heard wrong “ she said itching her head. Still wondering about him changing his look, but it passed.

Flower got to his room and A.2.9… I mean Aludar, slowly went in the room. The room was big for one person there was only one bed, a shelf and a clock inside.
“You’ll have to fix it up a bit” Flower said with a smile
“No it’s grate,” Aludar said with a smile as well, as if he was copying her.  
“So supper will be done soon so get ready ok Aludar “ Flower went off
“O…ok” he adds

   Ding! The doorbell rang; Coco ran to the door and opened it slowly. A man in a black hood jacket that was on his head so that you can’t see his face stud at the door,
“Why hello long time no see old friend, how have you been Moke?” Coco asked
“Fine and you?” Moke answered
He took off his hood and came in. Moke had long red hair, was about 21 years old, blue eyes and at lest 6 feet tall or higher. He gave a smile and looked down at Flower, who was there all that time.
“How are you Flower?” he asked  
“Not much and you what’s up? Oh yah its you” Flower said back
“Don’t be so rude“ Coco added, giving an evil eye to Flower.
“Don’t worry I can tell you two are family” Moke said with a laugh  
    Aludar came running down and he stopped right under Moke
“And who is this?” Moke said
“Aludar I’d like you to meet Moke “ Flower said
“Aludar? I thought you said his name was A29?” Coco asked, looking at him because he looked different, but she only thought it was he eye sight acting up.   Moke’s ears jumped at the named A.2.9 and he gave Aludar a smile.
“ Yeah well I herd him wrong. Anyway he said his name is Aludar” Flower said back.
Aludar looked up at Moke, somehow in Aludar’s eyes it seemed he knew him, like from somewhere but he didn’t know where, or didn’t remember.
“Umm hello sir “ Aludar gulped
“ Sir… ha-ha no call me Moke, Aludar right, “ Moke added
“Y…yes”
“Good to know. Anyway I’m the cook here, so what do you guys want to eat?” Moke asked taking his jacket off and putting it inside the closet.                                           
“Something good “ Coco said
“How about FOOD!” Flower yelled
“How about the new guy? What would you like to eat Aludar?” Moke said with a smile as if he were giving Aludar a test.
“Umm…” Aludar said shyly                                                                      
“Go on, say it” Moke said
“Ya and hurry it up, I’m hungry “ Flower said
“How about spaghetti” Aludar said fast, even if he didn’t know what food or what spaghetti was. But it seemed the words just came out of him like he knew what it was but he didn’t remember anything. Even he started to know that there was something different about him that was not like anyone else.
   It had been at least two hours when finally…DING!
“SUPPERS READY!” Moke yelled from the diner table.
Flower came running down to the table, sat down and said fast without thinking.
“Okay lets eat!”
“Hey wait until the others come” Moke said
Coco came down the steps, so did Aludar.
  They began to eat when suddenly the door opened with a faint Squeak and a man came in, his hair over his eyes.                                        
  The mans hair was short, a reddish fire colour and he was in a jacket that looked like a cape, the man slowly came in, he was wet because it was poring rain outside.  
“You’re just in time for dinner and next time knock I think you sacred Flower and the new guy,” said Moke.
Moke looked at Flower and Aludar, they were hooked to each other and panting. They looking at Moke with a look that said  “Who is that guy?”
  Moke got up “Flower, Aludar, Cocosin this is my adoption father Annagog”
“Ann a what?” Flower said as she peeled Aludar off of her
“You have a father?” said Aludar not knowing what it was.
“Ok how’s this you two can call me Ann “ Annagog said as he took off his jacket Aludar looked at him the same way he looked at Moke.
“So this is your father “ Coco said
“Nice to meet you. You must be Cocosin ” said Ann as he took her hand and shook it.
“Oh Moke may I speak to that boy alone? I think I know him,” asked Ann pointing at Aludar with a surprised face.
“Why me and who is this guy” thought Aludar.
“Alright” Moke said as if he knew what Ann was thinking. Aludar stood up and walked away into the living room with Ann, there he stopped at a chair when Ann said. “Well it seems you finally show your self A.2.9 and in a kids body,”
“A.2.9 what do you mean sir?” asked Aludar, looked around the room.
After he said that he knew something was not right.
“Don’t play dumb you know who you are”                                        
“What are you talking about sir I don’t know anything about me, I don’t…sir who am I?” Aludar said back.
“I’ll tell you, you’re A.2.9 the android, the one that I hate, got that kid I don’t like you because you’re a monster” said Ann as he left.
“Am I really a monster?” Aludar whispered, then he fell down into the chair, rubbing his hands on it.

(Copyright of K.B Smith aka me, please no theft)
Ok here it is.

I know many of you have been asking about my novel and that you guys want me to put it up so I did.

Now this is the unedited one because there is still a bit more detail I have to put in. But anyways I may NOT put chapter 2 because I WANT TO PUB THIS and I have fear of theft.

Now I need your help really badly, the woman that may pub it needs to see if people will like it, so may you please COMMENT for me, I need ALL the help I can get.

All characters in story (c) of K.B. Smith AKA well me :)
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this story! I WANT IT TO BE A BOOK SOON! don't let me down LOL